proofread

web/peace/index.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ author: Cara
 
 ![Duif met kroon by Claude Mellan 1608 - 1688, courtesy of the Rijksmuseum's Free Archive.](dovecara.jpg)
 
-***Peace*** works less as a game per-se, and more as an exercise in reconnecting to your senses (smell, temperature, touch) by imagining oneself in imaginary landscapes. 
+***Peace*** works less as a game per se, and more as an exercise in reconnecting to your senses (smell, temperature, touch) by imagining oneself in imaginary landscapes. 
 It takes on the text-adventure format by asking its players to respond "yes" to continue at each step. 
 
 Here is an excerpt:
@@ -40,5 +40,3 @@ Here is an excerpt:
 ***if yes, then... and so on***
 
 You can find the game on our website.
-
-