From 5937a2706456d7e8aaa8fb839b37d1df157b5e80 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: bo Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2023 15:52:44 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] proofread --- web/peace/index.md | 6 ++---- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/web/peace/index.md b/web/peace/index.md index 409fc8b..7b42b27 100644 --- a/web/peace/index.md +++ b/web/peace/index.md @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ author: Cara ![Duif met kroon by Claude Mellan 1608 - 1688, courtesy of the Rijksmuseum's Free Archive.](dovecara.jpg) -***Peace*** works less as a game per-se, and more as an exercise in reconnecting to your senses (smell, temperature, touch) by imagining oneself in imaginary landscapes. +***Peace*** works less as a game per se, and more as an exercise in reconnecting to your senses (smell, temperature, touch) by imagining oneself in imaginary landscapes. It takes on the text-adventure format by asking its players to respond "yes" to continue at each step. Here is an excerpt: @@ -39,6 +39,4 @@ Here is an excerpt: ***if yes, then... and so on*** -You can find the game on our website. - - +You can find the game on our website. \ No newline at end of file