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 Garden Leeszaal, we started re-considering the word “library” as a verb;
 actions that sustains the production, collection and distribution of
 texts. A dive into the understanding structure of libraries as systems
-of producing knowledge and unpacking classification as a process that
+of producing knowledge; unpacking classification as a process that
-(un)names, distinguishes, excludes, displaces, organizes life. From the
+(un)names, distinguishes, excludes, displaces, and organizes life. From the
 library to the section to the shelf to the book to the page to the text.
 The zooming in and zooming out process. The library as a plain text.</p>
 <p>Like community gardens, libraries are about tenderness and
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ machines, a cloud of cards, a sleeve that warms up THE BOOK.</p>
 <img src="pruning.jpg"
 alt="Irmak’s and Aglaia’s Pruning station, where people edited punctuation and text, scanned it then printed it with a dot matrix." />
 <figcaption aria-hidden="true">Irmak’s and Aglaia’s Pruning station,
-where people edited punctuation and text, scanned it then printed it
+where people edited punctuation and text, scanned it, then printed it
 with a dot matrix.</figcaption>
 </figure>
 <figure>