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   TL;DR researches ways to make sense of the hidden labour that goes on in a feminist server through log files and unlogged activity.
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-  Log files are inaccessible files that track the work a server performs as data. They're both hard to retrieve, hard to decipher, and have a bias towards the technological ecology, prioritizing the labour of machines.
+  The unlogged activity of a server includes the physical labour, the decisions about shared spaces, the different knowledges that depend on each other for the network to exis
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-  chopchop is a a Raspebrry Pi that is configured, maintained and used by XPUB1 as a community server.
+  Activity that is logged, is often compiled in inaccessible log files that track the work a server performs as data. They're both hard to retrieve, hard to decipher, and have a bias towards the technological ecology, prioritizing the labour of machines.
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-  The unlogged activity of a server includes the physical labour, the decisions about shared spaces, the different knowledges that depend on each other for the network to exist.
+  Chopchop is a a Raspebrry Pi that is configured, maintained and used by XPUB1 as a community server.
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+  <p>
+  Chopchop is a a Raspberry Pi that is configured, maintained and used as a community server by XPUB1
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   This EPUB is a generated compilation of logs with annotations that provide context to the situatedness of this technology. With one book a day, a diary of chopchop is kept, stored and shared.