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+    assumes a certain kind of reader
+    address where to link the necessary resources
+
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         <p>VueUse is a collection of utility functions based on Composition API. We assume you are already familiar with the basic ideas of Composition API before you continue.</p>
         <a href="https://vueuse.org/guide/">VueUse</a>
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+    refer to a particular language context (in this case french), a similar choice was made for vue, by the same developer
+    quick, faster and leaner development, compared to what?
+    lean from lean manufacturing?
+    for "modern" project. what is modern here?
+
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         <p>Vite (French word for "quick", pronounced /vit/, like "veet") is a build tool that aims to provide a faster and leaner development experience for modern web projects.</p>
         <a href="https://vitejs.dev/guide/">Vite</a>
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+    refer to a particular language context (in this case german)
+    it began as a simple collection: acknowledge the origins of the project
+    repeat WSGI three times without explaining, implying a certain kind of technical knowledge
+    time composite documentation: last sentence has been added later on.
+
     <div class="opening">
         <p>
         werkzeug German noun: “tool”. Etymology: werk (“work”), zeug (“stuff”). Werkzeug is a comprehensive WSGI web application library. It began as a simple collection of various utilities for WSGI applications and has become one of the most advanced WSGI utility libraries.</p>
         <a href="https://werkzeug.palletsprojects.com/en/2.2.x/">Werkzeug</a>
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+    fast, expressive, extensible
+    three features oriented to different needs
+    the figure of the engine
+    refer to the python community
 
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         <p>Jinja is a fast, expressive, extensible templating engine. Special placeholders in the template allow writing code similar to Python syntax. Then the template is passed data to render the final document.</p>
         <a href="https://jinja.palletsprojects.com/en/3.1.x/intro/">Jinja</a>
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+    focus on accessibility and scale
+    time composite documentation: last sentence has been added later on.
+    acknowledge the origin of the project
+
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         <p>Flask is a lightweight WSGI web application framework. It is designed to make getting started quick and easy, with the ability to scale up to complex applications. It began as a simple wrapper around Werkzeug and Jinja and has become one of the most popular Python web application frameworks.</p>
         <a href="https://palletsprojects.com/p/flask/">Flak</a>
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+   set the context: everyday life + artistic practice
+   digital life deeply connected with the idea of office and workspace
+   artistic operating system could sound like a disclaimer
 
     <div class="opening">
         <p>The Screenless Office is an interface for everyday (digital) life without a screen. It is an artistic operating system.</p>
         <a href="https://gitlab.com/bhowell/the-screenless-office">The screnless office</a>
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+    address a problem: to keep track of otherwise scattered pads
+    acknowledge external actors, such as the mediawiki api
+    refer to a specific context: people orbiting around xpub and lens based wiki, using etherpad
 
     <div class="opening">
         <p>The Padliography is a tool to keep track of our pads. It is built to interact with the MediaWiki API, and it uses XPUB & Lens-Based Wiki’s pages as archive.</p>
         <a href="https://git.xpub.nl/kamo/pad-bis">pad-bis</a>
     </div>
 
+    small app small server, probably for small drawings?
+    open to plurality of sources and destinations
+    architecture overview (sources and destinations connected through an express server via websockets)
 
     <div class="opening">
         <p>A small app for collecting drawings in real time. Runs on a small express server that connects sources (where to draw) and destinations (where to display) via websockets.</p>
         <a href="https://git.xpub.nl/kamo/drw">drw</a>
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+    address a specific public
+    to improve workflow, what does improve mean ? faster? less keystrokes?
+
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         <p>Emmet is a web-developer’s toolkit that can greatly improve your HTML & CSS workflow</p>
         <a href="https://docs.emmet.io/">Emmet</a>