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@@ -9,23 +9,21 @@ author: Aglaia
 ## clicking game
 
 
-I wasn\'t aware about the existence of the clicking games a couple of
+A a couple of months ago, I wasn\'t even aware of the existence of clicking games. When I played for the first time, I couldn\'t understand why
-months ago. When I played for the first time, I couldn\'t understand why
+people are intrigued enough to devote themselves in clicking, and I still struggle a little to understand. I wanted to
-people are intrigued enough in order to devote themselves in clicking .
-I still struggle a little bit to understand. My main intention was to
 create a clicking game that would highlight the act of clicking to the
 player through the interface of the screen. People would see a hand
 clicking in their screen and then at the next stage a person in front of
 a screen (with a hand clicking) clicking etc. My poor java script skills
-didn\'t allow me to materialise my initial idea, so eventually I came up
+didn\'t allow me to realise my initial idea, so eventually I came up
 with really simple version of the click_click game. People click on the
 click button that makes a \"click\" sound. Every time they click, a new
 button is generated. The aim is to click so as to accumulate bricks. A
-repetitive performance. You click you gain. The end of the game is when
+repetitive performance. You click you gain. The game ends when
-you full your screen and build a wall out of click buttons. Then the
+you fill your screen and build a wall out of click buttons. Then the
 screen clears automatically and a small victory message appears. What
 happens when the only function to be performed is clicking? Nothing I
-guess
+guess.
 
 
 ![the click wall](click.png)