diff --git a/bibliography.md b/bibliography.md
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@@ -9,11 +9,3 @@
 - Hanlon, J. (2018). Stack Overflow Isn’t Very Welcoming. It’s Time for That to Change. [online] Stack Overflow Blog. Available at: https://stackoverflow.blog/2018/04/26/stack-overflow-isnt-very-welcoming-its-time-for-that-to-change/.
 - Fisher, M. (2013). Suffering With a Smile. [online] Available at: https://theoccupiedtimes.org/?p=11586 [Accessed 16 Feb. 2023].
 
-### TODO:
-
-https://ironicsans.substack.com/p/the-strangest-computer-manual-ever
-https://www.ironicsans.com/2010/02/they_dont_make_computer_manual.html#comment-403451
-
-https://www.ironicsans.com/ace100.pdf
-https://www.ironicsans.com/ace1000.pdf
-https://knowingmachines.org/critical-field-guide
diff --git a/chapters/01_who_is_reading.md b/chapters/01_who_is_reading.md
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@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ yes because
     it's consulted not just from beginner, but also experienced users - see a code companion
 
 yes but
+    it should be less hostile - see welcoming writing
     it should stop assuming reader
-    it should be more welcoming for different kind of knowledges
 
 leading to --> 2. welcoming different knowledges
 ```
@@ -97,6 +97,7 @@ Instead...
     -   read the feminist manual (karagianni, 2021 )
 
 
+
 - bro culture ? ? ? (could be the transition from previous section) (could be the example with evvvvil help patches)
 
 vvvv is a visual programming language that offers an agile approach to prototyping, adoperated especially in the context of interaction design. Here agile means rapid, but also flexible, but also simplified: it grants an iterative work of fine tuning, necessary when dealing with real time inputs, such as sensors, live data, or human interaction.  
@@ -106,7 +107,7 @@ used esp with interaction design
 fine tuning, iterative process
 help patches 
 
-- refer to a specific niche ? see ullman, even tho need to counter balance with other examples
+- refer to a specific cultural niche ? see ullman, even tho need to counter balance with other examples
 
 - manuals often address just male developers
 
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 # Notes to the self
 
+## Plan for first draft deadline (20/02/2023)
+
+- intro good
+- first chapter 60% good 40% outline
+- second & third chapters outline and refs
+- update readme.md
+
 
 ## 9/02 Buddies session with Alex & Marloes
 
diff --git a/queue.md b/queue.md
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 # What to read next?
 - [A Research UNIX Reader: Annotated Excerpts from the Programmer’s Manual, 1971-1986](https://www.cs.dartmouth.edu/~doug/reader.pdf)
+
 - Sphere 300 corporation user manual (the one Supi sent)
-- Franklin Ace 100 user manual (the one Jian sent)
+
 - [The Jargon File](http://www.catb.org)
+
+- [Strangest computer manual ever](https://ironicsans.substack.com/p/the-strangest-computer-manual-ever)
+- [They dont make computer manual like this anymore](https://www.ironicsans.com/2010/02/they_dont_make_computer_manual.html#comment-403451)
+- [Franklin Ace 100 user manual](https://www.ironicsans.com/ace100.pdf)
+- [Franklin Ace 1000 user manual](https://www.ironicsans.com/ace1000.pdf)
+
+- [knowing machines - critical field guide](https://knowingmachines.org/critical-field-guide)