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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ And how can situated software inform the process of technical writing?
 
 The thesis is composed of different texts: some provide context and critical background to situate the research, while others consist in experiments of actual documentation written for software developed within our course.
 
-Every piece of documentation will try to reflect on different aspects.
+Every piece of documentation will try to reflect on different angles.
 
 ![exploratory documentation aspects + 2 frogmouth birds](img/frogmouth_aspects.jpg)
 
@@ -46,4 +46,4 @@ More precisely these four aspects will be addressed:
 -   **Susteinability**
     How to face the lack of resources when approaching technical writing? Strategies to share workloads and collaboration. Strategies to take care of shared piece of software.
 
-The critical and theoretical research will be weaved around the actual documentations, in order to create a discourse around the development of this practice.
+The critical and theoretical research will be weaved around the actual documentations, in order to create a discourse and annotate the development of this practice.