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     -   programming for the millions (ullman, 2016)
     -   read the feminist manual (karagianni, 2021 )
 
-- manuals often address just male developers
-- often documentation doesn't offer entry points for beginners, or a sense of direction
-
 
 - bro culture ? ? ? (could be the transition from previous section) (could be the example with evvvvil help patches)
 
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 vvvv is a visual programming language that offers an agile approach to prototyping, adoperated especially in the context of interaction design. Here agile means rapid, but also flexible, but also simplified: it grants an iterative work of fine tuning, necessary when dealing with real time inputs, such as sensors, live data, or human interaction.  
 
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 vvvv is a visual programming language
 used esp with interaction design
 fine tuning, iterative process
 help patches 
 
-- refer to a specific cultural niche ? see ullman, even tho need to counter balance with other examples
+- refer to a specific niche ? see ullman, even tho need to counter balance with other examples
 
+- manuals often address just male developers
 
+- often documentation doesn't offer entry points for beginners, or a sense of direction