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@@ -92,15 +92,13 @@ It would be easier to believe in technosolutionism: to think that issues such as
 elaborate on technosol
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-But then what are we doing? If all these efforts to write documentation are not revolutionary, if they don't bear solutions, it they tackle minimal portions of major issues. Where is the twist in this idea of code documentation as publishing practice?
+But then what are we doing? If all these efforts to write documentation are not revolutionary, if they don't bear solutions, it they tackle minimal portions of major and systemic issues. Where is the twist in this idea of code documentation as publishing practice?
 
-```placeholder
-Three sources that could be explored here relate to an alternative to the model of technosolutionism.
-```
+Three sources that could be explored here relate to an alternative to the model of technosolutionism
 
-- the plot of her undoing - saidiya hartman
-- federico campagna - technics and magic
+- the plot of her undoing - saidiya hartman - the undoing of the plot
+- federico campagna - technics and magic - _taqiyya_, _kitman_ and secret - education vs initiation
 - a way of saying from bergamo dialect about fire and embers
 
 
-documentation to keep going, to reassure, to bond, v
+documentation to keep going, to reassure, to bond