diff --git a/nim/contents.md b/nim/contents.md index 64ecd92..d75c41b 100644 --- a/nim/contents.md +++ b/nim/contents.md @@ -5,8 +5,7 @@ contents: - July 2056, the Nim population has hit a point of stagnation. - My name is 1, I am a proud, yet worn out, nimizen of what is known as the Nimation for now more than five centuries. - Since our formation in Europe in 1532 our population has not decreased nor increased. - - We remain a steady and horrifyingly tiresome sixteen individuals, - - "stuck in what is now a seriously embarrassing hierarchical structure: the pyramid." + - We remain a steady and horrifyingly tiresome sixteen individuals, "stuck in what is now a seriously embarrassing hierarchical structure: the pyramid." - Our society used to be organised in the following structure - 1 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 #TODO: replace with image? @@ -17,22 +16,17 @@ contents: - (ii) Nimizens are only able to communicate with their immediate neighbour, i.e 1 and 7 can never be in touch - (iii) Only Nim’s of an identical position within our pyramid structure can navigate outside of the pyramid together at once - - As you may imagine, the referral to multiple 1s, 2s, 3s, 4s and 5s was quite unsettling, - - raised jealousies and could get outsiders confused. + - As you may imagine, the referral to multiple 1s, 2s, 3s, 4s and 5s was quite unsettling, raised jealousies and could get outsiders confused. - The Nim Revolution, 1904, marked a turn in our history as new names were assigned to each nimizen - 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16. - 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 #TODO: replace with image? - - Embracing each nimizen as individuals, - - through distinct names and physical features became the norm. - - Our diversity had finally become the trope for - - a fair representation of the self within a co-dependent society. - - The following year, 1905 - - the L-group composed of 3, 7, 13, 14, 15, 16 and myself - - wanted to go even further and re-considered our architectural ideologies. + - Embracing each nimizen as individuals, through distinct names and physical features became the norm. + - Our diversity had finally become the trope for a fair representation of the self within a co-dependent society. + - The following year, 1905 the L-group composed of 3, 7, 13, 14, 15, 16 and myself wanted to go even further and re-considered our architectural ideologies. - - We wanted to implement a new set of rules + - We wanted to implement a new set of rules: - (i) Nimation is opened to groups as much as individuals. It will no longer be a couple only experience. - (ii) A nimizen should be able to engage with any other nimizens and not only their immediate neighbour @@ -42,8 +36,7 @@ contents: - (vi) One’s fate shouldn’t be set in stone, one should have agency as to the path one chooses - (vii) Nimation should be open to the growth of its nimizens as well as its annihilation, retirement of its nimizens or replacement of its nimizens - - Unable to convince the others of the necessity of the institution’s rewriting - - our structure remained the same. + - Unable to convince the others of the necessity of the institution’s rewriting our structure remained the same. - "1: Psst." - "Silence."