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@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ The topological way to think and write the thesis is to be find somewhere around
 -   the branching and merging pathways of version control systems, and
 -   the content aggregation approach of bookmarking tools such as are.na
 
-At the moment I can see it as a feed with a tagging system. The plan is to gather contents and curate them in a non-linear fashion, so instead of following the plan written above as a series of step, imagine to read it as a coral-like creature.
+At the moment I can see it as a feed with a tagging system. The plan is to gather contents and curate them in a non-linear fashion, so instead of following the index as a series of step, imagine to read it as a coral-like creature, with materials forking and interfering with each other.
 
 These contents will be a mix of diverse registry, from the essayistic to the technical to the anedoctic, in order to have several layers of accessibility. The consistency of the discourse will vary: some parts will be more narrative and some other more scattered.