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 -   something that my parents, that are outside this bubble, could understand
 
--   imagine the tone of a discussion around a technical manual: how can we make it more accessible? how can we make it more clear? some jokes not 100% related. technicalities. could it work for someone with a different background?
-
--   imagine a list, so in a way both a linear and non-linear narration
-
--   develop a writing machine for this. a specific way to write the thesis.
+-   imagine the tone of a discussion around a technical manual: how can we make it more accessible? how can we make it more clear? some jokes not 100% related. technicalities. how could it work for someone with a different background?
+
+-   imagine a list, so in a way both ultra-linear and non-linear narration
+
+-   develop a writing machine for this. a specific way to write the thesis. that could be (ideas):
+    -   tagging aesthetic:
+        -   a lot of short pieces tagged with different categories
+        -   that could be aggregated by topic, or chronologically or
+            -z
+    -   sortable list
+
+forms of the list
+
+-   a
+    -   b
+    -   c
+    -   ... (can grow)
+-   e
+    -   f
+    -   g