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     Hi. I made this play for you; it’s a question to keep us alive together. Is all intimacy about bodies? What happens when our bodies distance intimacy from us?<br>
-    Backplaces is a web-based play. A short anthology of poems and stories about vulnerability, intimacy, and the internet. It explores the internet as a place for holding big feelings and intimacy when it is unbearable.  As an homage to those who have have been vulnerable with me I created  "backplaces". They are tender online spaces for relief and acknowledgement of societal pain.<br> Some of these stories may evoke memories of pain. As you sit in the audience, know I am with you. If it feels overwhelming, you can step out, take a break, or leave. This isn't choreographed, and I care for you.
+    Backplaces is a web-based play. A short anthology of poems and stories about vulnerability, intimacy, and the internet. It explores the internet as a place for holding big feelings and intimacy when it is unbearable.  As an homage to those who have been vulnerable with me I created  "backplaces". They are tender online spaces for relief and acknowledgement of societal pain.<br> Some of these stories may evoke memories of pain. As you sit in the audience, know I am with you. If it feels overwhelming, you can step out, take a break, or leave. This isn't choreographed, and I care for you.
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     I hope you see what I saw in these stories. Sweet dreams now, and I'll talk to you soon.
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