From 1fd5fc4cd5121b10753aedbea78121a9133ccb10 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: kendalb <kendalb@xpub.nl>
Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2022 00:29:22 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Update 'virtualgarden/index.html'

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- <p>This project cultivates care through reclaimed digital spaces. Offering an alternative landscape for all your online needs, the concept stems from a rising displacement from current big tech spaces and platforms. Inside the Garden OS, you can discover a portal into an underground and subversive way of being online. If you are feeling disenfranchised from the standardised platformisation of social media and the surge of algorithmic content, retreat with Virtual Gardens to a newly cultivated world harking back to Web 1. This is a space where we can creatively express ourselves with experimentation and play, and, most importantly, agency.
+ <p>This portal cultivates care through reclaimed digital spaces. Offering an alternative landscape for all your online needs, the concept stems from a rising displacement from current big tech spaces and platforms. Inside the Garden OS, you can discover a path into an underground and subversive way of being online. If you are feeling disenfranchised from the standardised platformisation of social media and the surge of algorithmic content, retreat with Virtual Gardens to a newly cultivated world harking back to Web 1. This is a space where we can creatively express ourselves with experimentation and play, and, most importantly, agency.
 
-<br><br>This project aims to give visibility to the many self organised communities online who subvert and play with web capabilities through giving autonomy to users, bringing us back as creators as opposed to consumers. Go forth and cultivate your garden.🌿 </p>
+<br><br>Virtual Gardens aims to give visibility to the many self organised communities online who subvert and play with web capabilities through giving autonomy to users, bringing us back as creators as opposed to consumers. Go forth and cultivate your garden.🌿 </p>
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