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From: suzan <irmaksuzanertas@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 6 Jun 2024 19:04:43 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] project desciption-irmak

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 <div id="content"><h1 id="title">Wink- A Prototype for Interactive Children's Literature</h1>
 <h3 id="grad-project-description">Grad project Description</h3>
-<p>Wink is a platform which contains a children’s story I wrote called Bee Within and am making into an interactive experience, in relation to my research. Throughout this year, I hosted three workshop with kids between the ages 6-8 where we read "Bee Within" and played improvisation games around this theme; games including sound, acting, drawing. The main aim is to make the reading experience more fun for children and to make them re-visit the text to read through the multiple narratives in the story. </p>
+        <p>Wink is a prototype for an interactive picture book platform. This platform aims
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 # Title
 Wink- A Prototype for Interactive Children's Literature
 ### Grad project Description
-Wink is a platform which contains a children’s story I wrote called Bee Within and am making into an interactive experience, in relation to my research. Throughout this year, I hosted three workshop with kids between the ages 6-8 where we read "Bee Within" and played improvisation games around this theme; games including sound, acting, drawing. The main aim is to make the reading experience more fun for children and to make them re-visit the text to read through the multiple narratives in the story. 
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+to make reading into a mindfull and thought provoking process by using interactive and playful elements, multiple stories within one narrative and sound elements. Especially today where consumerism and low attention span is a rising issue especially amongst young readers, this was an important task to tackle. The thought of Wink emerged to find a more sustainable and creative way of reading for elementary school children.