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dramaturgies within the educational institution I was part of as a student.
I was curious about educational bureaucratic mechanisms being driven by
smaller-scale paperwork struggles and peers’ narratives, stories and
-experiences. However, unexpected emergencies - due to my eviction on the
-31st of January 2024 - placed centrally my personal struggles unfolded
-in parallel with the making period. I ended up conducting accidentally
-auto-ethnography as the project was dynamically being reshaped due to
-the material constraints of the bureaucratic timeline.
+experiences. However, unexpected emergencies - my eviction on the
+31st of January 2024 - made central my personal struggles which then unfolded
+in parallel with the making period. I ended up conducting accidental
+auto-ethnography as the project was dynamically reshaped due to
+the material constraints of a bureaucratic timeline.
Talking Documents are performative bureaucratic text inspections that
intend to create temporal public interventions through performative
-readings. I utilized the paperwork interface of my smaller-scale story
+readings. I utilised the paperwork interface of my smaller-scale story
in order to unravel and foreground questions related to the role of
-bureaucracy as less material border and as a regulatory mechanism
+bureaucracy as a less material border and as a regulatory mechanism
reflecting narratives, ideologies, policies.
-
Central element of this project is a seven-act scenario that
-construct my personal paperwork story, unravelling the actual struggles
+
A central element of this project is a seven-act scenario that
+constructs my personal paperwork story, unravelling the actual struggles
of my communication with the government. The body of the text of the
“theatrical” script is sourced from the original documents, email
threads as well as recordings of the conversations with the municipality
-of Rotterdam, I documented and archived throughout this period. I
+of Rotterdam that I documented and archived throughout this period. I
preserved the sequence of the given sentences and by discarding the
graphic design of the initial forms, I structured and repurposed the
text into a playable scenario.
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ publishing and as a communal tool for inspecting bureaucratic bordering
infrastructures. How can these re-enactments be situated in different
institutional contexts and examine their structures? I organized a
series of performative readings of my own bureaucratic literature in
-different spaces and contexts, pubic and semi-public WDKA, Art Meets
+different spaces and contexts, pubic and semi-public WDKA, the Art Meets
Radical Openness Festival in Linz, the City Hall of Rotterdam where I
invited people to perform the play together, like a tiny theatre.
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Master’s students. Each edition focuses on a specific theme or issue.
The themes tie to external events and collaborations. Students and staff
work together to explore these themes, rethinking what a publication can
-be. Each edition culminates in a celebratory release party.The
+be. Each edition culminates in a celebratory release party. The
structure, tools, and workflows are reset every trimester. This reset
allows roles to rotate among participants and fosters an adapting
learning environment. It provides a space to experiment beyond
traditional collaborative methods.
Our inaugural Special Issue was number 19, in collaboration with
-Simon Browne. Garden Leeszaal was a snapshot of Leeszaal Library through
+Simon Browne. Garden Leeszaal was a snapshot of the Leeszaal community Library through
the metaphor of gardening. During the release, we invited participants
to engage with the library’s discarded books. We pruned, gleaned, and
grafted the books using pens, pen-plotters, scissors, and glue. Then we